Sustenance
Here's my first attempt at a cinquain...sustenanceyou speaki lean closerno matter that your wordshave no meaning to anyonebut youmy lovekeeps me hangingonto and sucking inevery pointless sentance that...
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Wow...what a picture and these are very good first attempts at Cinquain. Well done!I recently published three books through iUniverse.comYou can purchase a copy of my books "Poeternitry," "Fancy...
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The form is correct.The image disturbing.The message frightening.Evocative piece...Joel
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I know the feeling.. Very cool first Cinquain! Excellent presentation!~ Bruce
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Super write......goes great with the picture!Quote:my lovekeeps me hangingonto and sucking inevery pointless sentance that youbreathe out...lol......love is a strange thing huh? "You can give without...
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